Fleshing Out...continued

I had some feedback from my fellow artists and realised that the hand resting on the thigh needs to be wider and to spread the fingers more apart. Also to make that arm more wider as it was very thin. I needed to move the face around as well as it was not sitting in the correct position to be looking down toward the thigh/bum area. But i need to rework this AGAIN because it is now not big enough....................................needs to be matched up to the first hairline but retain the shape and direction. As well as this, i have reworked this photo in Paint to try map out the thigh area again because it looks as though it needs to be larger, more lifted up to distribute the weight onto the back leg more. I've also worked in extra fat lines across the torso to highlight the twisting and bending of the body.